Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
since the 1980s, there are numerous circus in various countries showed dolphins attractions. since dolphins were functioned as a subject for a circus, most of kids and parents feel dolphins are the funniest animals that were favored by them. Therefore, there are a bunch dolphins souvenirs which purchasable within the event was sold out quickly.
However, I would like to disagree that dolphins should be a subject of a circus which was maintained by some organizers. Before the show, there are a bunch of victims which executed by organizers towards dolphins, such as dolphins should stay and live in a small box which contains fossil fuel and salt water that was injured them, dolphins should be forced not to eat for a day, as well as some body part of dolphins should be cut. Absolutely, these patterns were indicated as torture towards animals.
On another hand, these patterns also gave some negative impact on dolphin's psychology and physics, i.e, dolphins tend to be easily depressed as well as the body should be easily sick. Hence, since the 2000s the European Union (eu) has regulated that all of the country's members should be banned animals attraction in their regions. Furthermore, the eu viewed that animals attraction just gave more benefit for the organizer then animals which should be victimized by them.
To sum up, animal attractions which especially dolphins attractions have more negative than positive impacts. So, the necessary for banning all of animals attractions is incredibly rationale. there are numerous kinds of alternatives attractions that could be showed by circus organizers, albeit do not by animals which especially dolphins.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, so, then, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25650557621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69571331477 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539033457249 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9855971157 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123355784288 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552112641068 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03824264728 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819875093356 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372390471728 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.