Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people thinks that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Progress of today's world is connected with many important factors. Thus, knowing the most important and valuable element in humanity progress is vital to study or pay certain attention. Now, may some people claim that Science and Technology are more essential than History in the development of this world, thus, subjects like these must be superior to history to be studied in schools, and others support the opposite view. I personally believe that both Science-Technology and History are about equally vital in today’s world, and this is due to two reasons which I will explore during the following essay.
No need to say, technological advancements have shown a substantial growth concerned with every field which will be explained about some of them in the following paragraph. First and foremost, it's because of science that many incurable diseases are cured in past decades or are going to be cured in the future. To put in simple, many cut edge researches are in progress in medical science which is believed that will lead to cure cancer, HIV-AIDS, and other life threatening diseases. Second, technology has also affected the business world which is essential in ongoing-world life. More precisely, it's technology which has motivated companies into more productivity; advancement in business world helps corporations get an edge on their competition as well as bring engaging products and services into market world. Last but not least, space technologies play a crucial role in the space world. More specifically, in the past time, astronomers had knowledge about stars, planets, galaxies, but it was not practical to go out in space and do exploration in there; in contrast, today, it's for profound aerospace technology that engineers can land on the moon and Mars or other planets which is important for humanity because it will probably result in finding life in other planets for human. Therefore, technical and scientific knowledge opens the door and allows people to enter the new world which is fully developed and well civilized.
Although, all people are living histories, and they must study history to have basement on which to build. To clarify, all technological and scientific developments in every generation are made by some changes in earlier generation's scientific-technical advancements. In other words, people cannot develop everything they need starting from the basics; it
took a long unfolding history to get everything to now. As a matter of explanation, every science has been made, technology has been created, mistake has been made, idea has been shared in past lives, are documented in the history
spectrum, a means of linkage between past and present, which has made it more convenient for scientists to pick up everything they need from the past and do their research based on it.
To sum up, not only are science and technology vital for today’s life to progression, but also history is crucial to building and improvement of today’s science and technology based on the past. Therefore, history is a complement for scientific-technological world that must be studied as well as science and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in contrast, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2673.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27218934911 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08600162722 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7420046303 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262701729454 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873317093225 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571139447044 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131410351865 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950662782669 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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