The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts demonstrate the explanations why people prefer going to work by bike or car. Overall, the predominant reasons why bicycle is used to travel to work is for health fitness and reducing environmental issues, whereas the most common reason for driving choice is its comfort.

It is very clear that the main reasons behind travelling to office by bike are health fitness and the effort decreasing pollution, both of these two causes command 30% of total figure. Other three reasons which are parking issues, financial problems and speed comparing to car equally represent approximately from 12% to 15%.

In the car supporter’s perspective, the main reason why they enjoy driving to work is the comfort it brings back to them. The proportion of people supporting for comfort predominate among other four reasons at 40%. Standing at the second place is the distant problems, there are 21% of people believe that the length of the road leading to their work office effects their driving decision, this quantities is half of the highest-rated reason. The percentage of other three explanations which are the speed, safety and carrying properties similarly make up 14%, 11% and 14% of the total quantity, respectively. Coincidentally, the percentage of people who concede that the reason of choosing car is its faster speed comparing with cycling is approximate with the figure for intense opinion, at about 14%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
incidentally, second, similarly, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19480519481 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8631839584 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8861385296 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232278355745 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100591641318 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057020206413 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164295301252 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580409215607 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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