More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
After many foodies trends that human have gone through, now we have to face with one of the most difficult consequence, which is obesity. The population of overweight people is skyrocketing in these near centuries. While some people believe that raising the price of fattening food is an efficient way to solve this problem, I am of the opinion that it is far from being of the best method and there are many better measures to tackle the overweight problem.
On the one hand, I concede that making the fattening food more expensive is one way to slow down the increase in the amount of fat people. Because eating these highly fattening, such as fast food, soda, sugar sweetened food, could bring out many risks of being obesity and even heart stroke, diabetes. Thus, the price increase policy may discourage the consumers not to over-consume the junk food and as a result diminishing the percentage of overweight civilians. For example, almost everyone can afford McDonald's nowadays, but if we raise the price higher, some people could lose their interest in consuming that fast food. So in my opinion, I concur that increasing the fatty food’s price is a practical measure to adopt.
On the other hand, I strongly convinced of the opinion that the obesity situation have to be solved by a long-term holistic solution. This is because of gaining weight doesn’t originate only from eating too much fast food, it also have many other reasons. From my perspective, I think there are some better ways to resolve this obesity problem. One of them is that the government should raise citizen’s consciousness about the benefits of having healthy diets and doing exercise. Then, encouraging people consume more balanced diets with a lot of sugar-free food and non-fatty food and go to the gym as much as they can to keep fit.
To conclude, although I accept that raising the price of fatty food is a sensible method to slow down the increase in obesity, I find it there is way better and more effective to tackle this issue. I recommend that the government should bring out lots of campaigns to raise resident’s awareness of eating healthy and doing exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...from eating too much fast food, it also have many other reasons. From my perspective...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91327913279 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70738895982 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6630250429 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.866666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192149424665 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676187779718 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477310201732 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122248305377 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278339142596 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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