In today's world, in order to become a successful person, qualities required cannot be taught at universities and other academic institutions? To what extent do you agree or disagree.
These days, everyone wants to be a success story. Though colleges and universities award qualifications that help people reach a position in life, they don't guarantee ultimate success in their careers . I totally agree to the notion of essay.
A college or a university award degrees and certificates that can only help an individual getting a job and start a business but do not him climb the corporate ladder. In order to occupy a head position, one must posses some qualities that universities can not teach..For example, although thousands of people are recruited every year irrespective of region and organization,only few of them get to top most positions.
In order to become a successful person and to get to highest position in career , qualities such as perseverance and determinations are required. These traits are not taught at educational institutions but are learned through experiencing hardships and adverseries in life. Such people donot lose composure no matter how hard the circumstances are.For example Bill Gates, CEO and owner of Apple, electronic gadgets manufacturing company, was son of a farmer. He describes in his autobiography that he didn't had good chance at formal education but with determination and persistence, he made to the position he is at. Today, he is qouted as the success icon through out the world.
All of this being said, in conclusion, it is true that transcripts that universities and other educational institutions offer help one in securing a job or starting a business of one's own but they do not guarantee true success that is reaching the highest position wether it be in an organization or company. That can only be ensured by having certain characteristics-consistency and determination, not taught at these places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22027972028 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44256606209 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5761205673 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232844013077 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817706576628 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457693734064 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125486419887 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356206359161 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.