You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Officer,
I am writing you this letter to tell about problems recurring while living with my roommate. I hope complexity occurring will let you know on the significant accommodation adjustment.
I joined your college since a couple of months ago in the year of 2019 because I was not even opt to stay in shared or separate room , however , my personal feelings were high spirit to make new friends as well. Although, there's no doubt that pupil is honest and cooperative but he snores at night. As a result , I am unable to sleep and can not wake up early in the morning.
Kindly grant me the favour in this specific aspect and please seek for the another similar place where I could relax comfortably.Unless I would attend the class actively if effective efforts would not be made.
looking forward to your prompt response ,
Sincerely,
Rose.
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- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letterdescribe the situatio 56
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letterdescribe the situatio 56
Comments
Dear Mr. Jovi,
Dear Mr. Jovi,
I live at F2 killam apartments . I write this letter to express my disappointment about the room which i share with another girl. That girl timing for study is very odd so it disturbs my sleep and also she used to listen to music very loudly.
I requested her to stop these activities as it is making me difficult to take sleep properly. She also bring her friends in room for whole night and they were dancing and making noise.
So i am very frustrating with such environment as this is so disturbing for working person. She is a student so she did not understand.
I want to change my room so want you to check with person who is working as this will be manageable .You should talk to my room partner and make her understand to change her wrongdoings. Therefore i want you to scold her and get an apology letter for me.
I look forward to hearing from you and arrange different room for me.
Regards
Bryan
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Officer, I am writing you this letter to tell abo...
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...tay in shared or separate room , however , my personal feelings were high spirit t...
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... to make new friends as well. Although, theres no doubt that pupil is honest and coope...
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... looking forward to your prompt response , Sincerely, Rose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, while, no doubt, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82993197279 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75334261848 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.795918367347 0.622605031667 128% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5988945472 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 4.34317383033 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199002153669 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721005634804 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738879508568 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997722043834 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965434098521 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.