Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
food import and export are two important facts that governments, producers, and consumpters are faced with, in the recent ages. A significant group of people believes that everybody in society should buy and use local products to improving economy of the country, supporting from local farmers and businesses, and protecting the environment. In the following paragraphs, I intend to dive into the advantages of this idea is more than disadvantages.
At first, using local products help to employment and decrease the rate of jobless in local areas. It is clear that buying imported food can be harmful for internal farmers with declining their income and changing their job happened easily. For example, if iran farmers produced banana, it is better than iranian people consumpt domestic bananas instead of indian bananas.
By and large, the cost of local products is dramatically less than foreign products. It is a good illustration that omitting transportation costs is a clear benefit for human beings. Also, it can help to economy growth in the wide range. For instance, the money that will save deleting imported foods, can spend on health and education.
Finally, environment protection is another inspect of supporting local farmers and businesses. For example, if unnecessary transportation avoid, polution will have a went downtrend. On the other hand, loss of local products gradually reduced. To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, it is clear to support local farmers and local businesses needs of attention according to the mentioned reasons; meanwhile, it can have some advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Food
food import and export are two important fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30196078431 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92603685162 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.322853091 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175911660051 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523964256528 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369605919542 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102899630216 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405591609002 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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