You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Mr. Simpson,
I stayed in your hotel on the 23rd and 24th of October. I was in Room 603. When I arrived home, I discovered that I had left one of my bags at the hotel. Could you please check your Lost and Found Department and see if my bag is there?
The bag is a small black leather, document case with a narrow strap. Inside the bag, you will find several business cards, a fountain pen, a small address book, three copies of a business proposal and a silver pocket calculator. These things are not very valuable in money terms, but they have a lot of personal value.
I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible, particularly since I need the proposals for a presentation this week. If you could send the bag to me by courier service, I would be most grateful. I have arranged to pay for the service.
Thank you for your help.
Yours sincerely,
Michael Johnson
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 167 200
No. of Characters: 697 1000
No. of Different Words: 115 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.595 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.174 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.357 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.778 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.671 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4