The diagram below shows the way of producing raw material to make brick manufacturing.
Firstly, for processing to make building material will be utilized elevator machine¸ the process begins elevator will dig clay. Secondly, the clay will be processed to filter by used metal grid technology, it procedures material use roller so that to procedure will make the better quality. The material is made by adding little sand and water. Thirdly, there are two ways to create casting brick, using wire cutter and mold. It`s simple and easy to use mold.
The Next process, the bricks into drying oven for 24 hours some time 48 hours. After process dryer, then included the box for farmed up is called kiln. Burning procedure to moderate in 200⁰C -980⁰C. Then make second burning temperature 870⁰C - 1300⁰C, after that bricks included in cooling chamber for 48 – 172 hours. Finally, after it`s colled the bricks ready to packaging.
The system shows how to make bricks that can be used to produce some of bricks.
- The table and the bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 50
- The diagram below shows the way of producing raw material to make brick manufacturing. 50
- in the past, most people lived in small villages where every one eles.Nowdays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.what do you think where the advantages of living in small community? 50
Firstly, for processing to make building material will be utilized elevator machine¸ the process begins elevator will dig clay.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
it procedures material use roller
Description: two verbs in one sentence
Sentence: Secondly, the clay will be processed to filter by used metal grid technology, it procedures material use roller so that to procedure will make the better quality.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to it and procedures
Sentence: Burning procedure to moderate in 200C -980C.
Description: The word in is not usually used as a nil
Suggestion: Refer to in
the bricks into drying oven for 24 hours some time 48 hours.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 155 200
No. of Characters: 729 1000
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.528 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.703 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.132 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.68 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.532 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4