discuss whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life & work.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s worlds upsurge in today maximum demand of quality of person and building impact on people’ life and work. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a minded of concerns in a one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There is a number of arguments is in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that good infrastructure motivates them to work hard with full dedication can not only contribute to every person firstly see design of building. But also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless, to say these entire merits stand, as far as arguments their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a systems, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication or perseverance hence, it is apparent why many one in favor of architectural design an proper ventilation.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of good design of building impact on people’s life work are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98832684825 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9288111178 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2919813041 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.2 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142534303186 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601511881221 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073448688991 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108841746764 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871323092423 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.