With the latest technology in the medical field is increasing life expectancy is this boom or curse discuss.
In the recent era, the advent of the latest sophisticated technologies in the field of the medical area is adding colossal improvement in human average life expectancy. Many people argue that this advent is a curse, Whereas other groups of people argue that its a boom. However, I completely agree that its a curse. In this essay, I will make a profound analysis of why its a curse.
Firstly, An increase in average life expectancy will add numerous problems to the existing generation to name a few: No newer jobs for the younger generation, Decrease in labor force as most of the working resources will be aged beyond working age. Additionally, It adds an increase in population and huge amounts are to be spent on medical expenses. For example, a recent survey conducted by New York State University states "Current population is at 70% and increasing rapidly at a pace where we have only 3% of land left for newer generations".
As"Every coin has two sides" Many people argue that an increase in life expectancy will have many advantages like Culture and languages can be saved, Every younger generation will interact with their grandparents they can be educated on morals and ways of living a positive and healthy life. Finally increased family bonding.
In a nutshell, I can conclude that the disadvantages outweigh advantages so the increase in life expectancy is adding more problems and issues rather than solving them.
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finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.075 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99850657272 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.1178007235 50.4703680194 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242283773013 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855188025681 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573714939449 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130032331337 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321609218407 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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