Law can change human behavior. Do you agree or not?
Main requirement of implementation of Law is to make sure that society and it's sanity remains in peace. Law is to make people aware of social responsibility. Making mistake is human nature as we learn from mistakes, but we should not punish someone in the name of LAW to such an extent that a person can never return back.
LAW is same for all adult those are above the age of 18 but it is not harsh for below 18 year old individual, this means system itself want to give a second chance to an individual, but what if people take it for granted and commit bigger crime to challenge the system. It is then imperative to make sure that person must go to proper training of habitat where they understand the need of society and good neighborhood. That is called as Jail, as per a journal in Harvard university it has been said that many Prisioners realise about their mistakes of adulthood when they live in a prison, they are given bail and even released because of good behaviour.
Definitely Law changes people for good cause, but we always have a black sheep in all herd, for them definitely we have strict rules.
Study said that LAW is made for the people to be safe and kind, it not only educate them to love their society rather also help them to respect the community and neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
... such an extent that a person can never return back. LAW is same for all adult those are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49789029536 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4874052951 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5124745689 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.9669160288 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109236706354 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497827811109 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398850350996 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681546169689 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476869398244 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.