In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this situation?
In modern society, visitation of art museums is decreasing. This is because people are not interested of visiting art exhibitions and prefer other types of entertainment. The key to solving the issue is promotion of art centers, conducting festivals involving arts and exhibition of popular collections.
Declining of the number of visitors in art centers and museums is caused by reducing overall interest in it among the people. As we know “the beauty is in the eyes of beholder” and if persons believed that a subject was boring, they would never attend it. In addition, modern reality offers us plenty of ways to spend free time, including the highly addictive Internet. Whereas art collections are staying the same for years and the local community have seen it as a rule.
One of the ways to tackle the issue is invitation of foreign artists’ exhibitions and famous collections. Thus, this measure will increase number of the domestic visitors and draw an attention of the foreign tourists. Along with it, a promotion campaign should be brought into the action; as many people hear about coming exhibition, as many will visit it. Among other things, thematic festivals with an art collection may attract more viewers. For instance, a thematic autumn festival can include some workshops for painting of the autumn landscape as well as a gallery of paintings depicting the autumn in different technic.
In conclusion, the cause behind declining of the number visitations of fine art galleries is lack of interest in seeing it. Some measures can be taken for solving it, such as advertising, art festival conduction and brining well-known collections from other museums.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l-known collections from other museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22710622711 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90733595285 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4218741824 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236360074536 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773772855435 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558291382316 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150342528601 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582743081017 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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