Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is an opinion that studying art in schools is one of the fundamentals, meanwhile there are those who disagree and consider that teaching art is loss of time. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion.
On the one side of the argument are those who believe that a school’s curriculum should include the art as one of the compulsory disciplines. This is because one of the crucial milestones in child’s development is evolving creativity and a non-standard approach to solving problems. While learning the art is a great tool stimulating a creation process. For instance, the youngsters drawing on daily basis have well-developed imagination and ability to express emotions through creation.
On the other side, there are people, who argue that the subject of art is necessary at school; by contrast, these individuals assume that studying it is meaningless activity. Nowadays, there are more important subjects to focus on at school, especially, exact sciences such as biology, chemistry, physics and mathematics. The main reason of it is that the humanity required much more high-teach engineers, qualified doctors and other STEM specialties. Thus, concentrating on deepest teaching of a hard science will probably encourage the younger generation to choose this path for their careers.
However, in my opinion despite the fact that STEM specialties in a high demand in modern society, I believe that the art is one of the core disciplines. Owing to the fact that the art creation boost a person’s imagination and it is understood that engineers should be able to look at ordinary things from a different angle.
In conclusion, both sides have their merits. On balance, however, I consider that it is necessary for educational program to include art as one of essentials.
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Many People Believe That…
Many People Believe That Social Networking Sites Have A Huge Negative Impact On Both Individuals And Society.
To what extent do you agree?
There is no doubt that these days’ social media networking sites like Facebook becoming very popular. However, the question; are social media platforms affecting our lives for both individuals and society. Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is social media having coverage millions of people using these platforms. The benefits of using it go to huge companies who spent most of their money on digital marketing. Amazon, for example; last year amazon spent millions of dollars on digital marketing, for instance, Facebook, Instagram, YouTube, and so on. Additionally, using these platforms causes easily communication for both individuals and the community. There are a lot of relatives who live in a different place around the world who have not seen each other for some time they can easily communicate by chatting and calling using these sites by saving their time and money.
On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact, these platforms have reduced face to face gathering that local communities have seen as a big problem due to many families' relatives destroyed that family members most of their time spending on mobile phones. Another factor that impactful by these sites is that some people fear speaking in front of other people. To illustrate, a study shows that young people using social media spending over 5 hours a day can't communicate properly with other people.
In conclusion, although using social media are inevitable in our lives and businesses, also it has a negative impact on the people that are spending lots of time on it by ignoring their essential duties in their lives
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...-standard approach to solving problems. While learning the art is a great tool stimul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01429741215 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5223582626 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239398470521 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078184445429 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513937303145 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129184879946 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525315603299 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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