Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment).
Do you agree or disagree?
As the saying goes "Money cannot buy anything and everything" which is true in every aspect of life. Although, it is a known fact that while considering a purchase, may it be a tangible or intangible cost is what matters to people the most, but not in every situation. Certainly, there are many other criteria’s that help a person to arrive at a decision to buy. I completely disagree to the statement stating money as the utmost thing for deciding a purchase. The following essay will discuss this in detail.
Yes, there have been instances where people must have thought about money first while reaching at a decision to buy an item but, such cases are a very few. For example, this can majorly happen in situations where people are going for luxury items which are a matter of prestige, hence the price at which it is bought is of importance, moreover it is a status symbol. Let’s take another example, say brand loyalty. Person who buy’s iPhone sticks with company even though new iPhone release are much more expensive in comparison to other brands such as OnePlus providing similar features at lower cost. Therefore purchasing decision is not governed by cost.
Can money buy you happiness or memories? the answer to this will always remain no. Despite of money being one of the factors, there are other criteria’s which are also taken into account along with money. Such as if a person has someone close hospitalized and needs to have a medicine which is expensive one cannot keep money as a decider because it’s a matter life and death. People may prefer borrowing money from the bank or take other assistance to go on a tour with family or a solo trip to a secluded place. Moments captured on trip are precious and above any monetary aspect.
To conclude, as stated above I completely disagree that money can only be the of deciding factor to go or not to go for purchase. The other factors have more weightage than money because if we keep considering money before buying things or taking a service that we cannot enjoy the right moments in the right age or time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77656675749 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64157097764 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550408719346 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5757740987 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117942935311 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364554293035 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345170723063 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07700555256 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200834381179 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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