You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,introduce yourselfexplain what experience an

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r, hope you are doing well. Yesterday ,i read a piece of news that you have job...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... hope you are doing well. Yesterday ,i read a piece of news that you have job ...
^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...llege student living in nearby area and i am doing BBA . I have 2 months of holid...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...living in nearby area and i am doing BBA . I have 2 months of holidays so i can do...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng BBA . I have 2 months of holidays so i can do this job as i have marketing ski...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n do this job as i have marketing skills .Also it will be good exposure for me to ...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...do this job as i have marketing skills .Also it will be good exposure for me to lear...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...do this job as i have marketing skills .Also it will be good exposure for me to lear...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oling from KV school with good aggregate . I am very excited about this job , if...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ggregate . I am very excited about this job , if you give me a chance i will sur...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ate . I am very excited about this job , if you give me a chance i will surely g...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...out this job , if you give me a chance i will surely give my best . if you want ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e me a chance i will surely give my best . if you want you can test me for one wee...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...e a chance i will surely give my best . if you want you can test me for one week ....
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...if you want you can test me for one week . I am living chanda soceity block 204-a ...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... I am living chanda soceity block 204-a . you can contact me on my email - jita12...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... am living chanda soceity block 204-a . you can contact me on my email - jita12@gma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 537.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 130.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13076923077 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38434877468 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684615384615 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 290.88556701 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8906201134 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.7 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187988008573 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701454664525 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679367704018 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119136631232 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435444479962 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.