The Pie charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

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The Pie charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The given pie charts illustrate the information about the survey that how people of two different age groups remain happy due to certain reason. Breaking it down in five different categories for people below 30 and above 30 years old.

Overall, most of the people belong to both the groups survive joyfully because of three common reasons which are doing hobbies, achievement at work and other factors.

Regarding the charts, achievement at work is the highest reason for the happiness of all age people who account for 31% for under 30 and 32% for over 30 years old people. Percentage-wise other two common factors behind the satisfaction of humans for both the groups are doing hobbies and other factors which are 22% and 14 respectively for people under 30 while 24% and 10% respectively for people over 30.

Looking at the dissimilar factors for both, 18% of people smile with having a good appearance in comparison with 15% of people due to travelling to numerous places who are under 30 years. On the other hand, for the other age group people, 20% are delighted by having a financially secured future and 14% are cheerful by spending quality time with family.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5685793739 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7561188595 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167391716656 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990611710531 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844608226711 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126294397077 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945551478539 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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