The pie chart below show recycling in Sydney, Melbourne and Worldwide
The charts bellow illustrate the recycling rate in Australia and worldwide, divided by three types of material.
It is clear in the chart that paper is the item that got recycled the most in the world, while glass recycling takes the highest portion in Melbourne.
In detail, worldwide recycling rate of paper is 54%. In Sydney and Melbourne, it's only 22% and 24%, respectively. That's only one fifth and one-fourth in each city's rate of recycling. On the other hand, the global only sees 11% of total glass products got reproduced, while in Sydney has its number tripled. Melbourne even has a bigger number of 55%, 5 times bigger than the world. In fact, this is the most recycled type of items at this city. Following by plastics, we can see a rate of 40% in Sydney, 21% in Melbourne and 34% in the world.
- The pie chart below show recycling in Sydney Melbourne and Worldwide 80
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ne, its only 22% and 24%, respectively. Thats only one fifth and one-fourth in each c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60689655172 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49670412947 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7248977272 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2222222222 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224208952298 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087850274042 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518168971075 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146527412508 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195759407578 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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