Worker are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long?
It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and progressive world where we live, having satisfied during work have played a prominent role in all society. Due to paramount importance, people have always been trying to find the best way in order to have an enjoyable time during their workday. I prefer to have similar tasks to do during my workday. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will show in the following essay.
First and foremost, having similar tasks, workers become more professional in their job and vocation. To be more specific. The more people do their job every day, the more they can do their job effectively. Moreover, when they become perfect in their work, they can do their duty in less time, which means that they have more time to learn new methods and new skills. Thus, they can enhance their capabilities. For example, when I worked as a graphic designer, I just did similar tasks during my workday. I had much time during day fo learning. As a result, after one year, I learned different type of programs related to my tasks in office such as Photoshop and Indesign. Owing to have one responsibility in my office, I could be a professional designer after hiring in a company, and it makes me happy to have my job.
Furthermore, having similar tasks to do, workers can concentrate well, and in this way, they do not have any stress and tension during the day. Obviously, without pressure, they can have a healthy life not only in their office but also they can have during their daily life. Moreover, working without tension leads to workers to do their duties accurate. When an individual does their duties without fault, they get more energy and a sense of satisfied. As a result, happy workers affect the company that they work there. As a recent study shows, a host of the company which defining one task for an individual to their staff work in the company without stress, having more than income compared to other companies.
All in all, taking into accounts of these factors, I believe that have similar tasks during the workday are more beneficiary in comparison with have different jobs. Not only it helps workers can be professional in their vocation but also they can work in the company without stress and tension.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, i feel, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72040302267 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51470180498 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476070528967 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9816585735 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2380952381 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441549144326 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144134975028 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098852779498 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288786318311 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055361692296 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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