Q.1
Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Explain what the problems is
• Suggest solutions to the problem
You do not need to write any addresses.
Dear Councilor,
My name is Jamail Zia, I have been living on the rue hampton street since the 3 year. My house is situated just at front of the construction site. Although I never have any problem with the authority of this town, this working site is making a horrible noise.
It would be on your knowledge that from last month, construction is carried out by the city government. This area has been filled with heavy machinery that make high intensity of disturbing noise. I and my neighbor are suffering from this problem almost from every day. And it seems that it will be continued still one more month.
As a responsible citizen of this country, I would like to advise you regarding this problem. It could be solved by either complete this project as soon as possible with more work force or allow this construction work only from 9 am to 5 pm, in this way we could be live with less or no noise.
I hope you will take this suggestion under the consideration.
Thank you
Your faithful
Jamail Zia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Councilor, My name is Jamail Zia, I have been livin...
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Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orking site is making a horrible noise. It would be on your knowledge that from ...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[3]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
...his country, I would like to advise you regarding this problem. It could be solved by eit...
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Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion under the consideration. Thank you Your faithful Jamail Zia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56593406593 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53265712867 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4742994728 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5454545455 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121171775083 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555886350005 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441571232059 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709084454366 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214392985455 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.