Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, some people would argue that sports are a predominate factor in the wellbeing of people. Indeed, to my mind, I admit that there are several most essential measures influence in public health apart from daily exercise. In this easy, how sport-related activities and other measures are taken part in human lives will be investigated.
To begin with, sports positively impact on public health and long-lasting life. Exercise, for instance, can be able to assist the blood pressure, the weight of the body and blood circulation maintaining well. Since early morning jogging or regular sports practices, unable to resist the stress and loss of concentration on life barriers. Although yet a number of sports has made up the significant positive side on health, which occasionally miss leading a routing life of the public, namely improper practice and a small fraction of availability of free time. A great deal of public lead a terrible life along with barely free time in order to do engage with self-attention. As a result, considering sports facilities not only utilize the requirement of health-related problems.
On the flip side, Rachel Carson, the author of “Silent Spring”, who duly remained the environmental issues caused by the human. Further, she mentioned that impact of the devastating environment thus concluded that negative effect on the public with regards to the polluted environment. In addition to that, the social and economic wealth of each human being and medical facilities have a tremendous influence on health. Cancer, for example, which must not cure with enlarging sport comforts, proper medicines and best food practices are crucial to handle it.
To conclude, since executing proper practice, the health of human being is positively enhanced. However, such is not only the enormous consideration, but treatment, environmental, social and economic factor must also be encouraged to increase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...some people would argue that sports are a predominate factor in the wellbeing of people. Inde...
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Suggestion:
...engage with self-attention. As a result, considering sports facilities not only u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01981986431 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645901639344 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7965756367 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212039686122 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677301394566 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454069968122 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119850649224 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558169294211 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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