you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

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you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the poor service provided by your bank recently. I ordered a new cheque book on last month, but still, I do not get it yet. Due to this issue, I made a call on last week to know the tracking number of my cheque book, your staff denied to answer this question.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. I applied cheque book before 14 days ago when I come to your bank in person. I had filled all the forms which are required and submitted this on the cashier desk on the same day. However, I have been 2 weeks, but it has not been received till now.

My account number is CA00179856892 and I need your favour to look into this matter personally. Since that time, I have not made any payments and so many bills pending owing to this very important for me to get this on time. Moreover, Could you tell me, how much time your branch will take to send this to me? Further, what action you will take against this matter. If possible, please send the detail that what action you have done against the delay of this chequebook.
Looking forward to your prompt response

Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied answering'.
Suggestion: denied answering
...ng number of my cheque book, your staff denied to answer this question. Kindly allow me to el...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nse Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40366972477 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22247588074 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646788990826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9010406224 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8461538462 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240393601209 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845501918545 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618934587464 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121823014465 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576872290194 0.0580467560999 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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