You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
Dear Sir,
I am a patron of your store. I am writing this letter to lodge my complaint regarding the problems I am facing with the laptop; I have purchased from your shop.
One month back, I acquired a laptop from Dell company. Which now creating several issues. The primary issue is while purchasing I have told you that I work from home; therefore I need good camera quality. As per your commitment, it has a 34-megapixel lens and 10 times zoom-in feature, unfortunately, the quality of the video is so poor- that it sometimes make difficult for me to interact with my customers and boss in a video conference meeting. The second challenge is, the screen suddenly gets blur or turn off. Apart from this, the audio speaker of the laptop is popping.
All these issues have dimmed my reputation as well as my hard work in front of my clients as well as my seniors. Moreover, I have almost lost not just their trust; but also my job. Before things get even worse, I demand its replacement at the earliest. I hope you understand the graveness of the situation
Anticipating my problem will be reconciled soon.
Yours Faithfully
Joe Pepper
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I acquired a laptop from Dell company. Which now creating several issues. The primar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70792079208 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66487958042 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693069306931 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6887914049 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1538461538 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221416880834 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654577887434 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055993862576 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112007666593 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608228814573 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.