YOU RECENTLY ORDERED ONLINE SOMETHING. WHEN THE DELIVERY CAME IT WAS NOT COMPLETE.
Write a letter to the compnay:
1) explain what you ordered and what is missing from your delivery
2) explain the importance of this delivery
3) ask for a replacement item to be sent.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to complain about the unavailability of the mobile charger that I have received for order number FG5023.
I ordered an Apple I-phone6 from your online website on 4th June 2019. The mobile phone was expected to deliver on 8th June, instead, I received it on 7th morning only, which made me happy and excited. On opening the packet, I found that the charger of mobile was missing. The phone without the charger is of no use to me.
I want to gift this cell phone to my mother on her 50th Birthday on 15th June. Because of this special occasion, I ordered in advance, but due to unavailability of a charger, the phone cannot be used nor gifted. It is an emotional and significant moment for me to gift the desired cell phone to my mother on her special day.
Since the phone cannot be operated without a charger, I would ask you to send me a new mobile phone with an original charger. I want the replacement as early as possible, due to the shortage of time. You can get it collected from the same address you delivered from Monday to Friday between 10 am to 6 pm.
Hope my complaint will be given due consideration.
Looking forward to quick replacement.
Your's faithfully
John Patel.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57207207207 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63128231469 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3290657795 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155823757094 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514086275582 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431087489469 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692837480507 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044915935423 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.