In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
At the older age, people prefer to live at old age homes with the poeple like them where they assist by nurses very well. Expence behind this sometime paid by United Kingdom government. One group of people have perception that, this kind of expense should be manage by their family where as other group want it to paid by the nation. I beleive that expense should be pay by authorities. Reasons behind this are explained further.
One main reason is, whole life people paid tax to the government, now it is their duty to take care of the citizen. Pople obey their duty and funding to nation for long time from younger age to older age. Now, old people do not in condition to work , so government should support them by helping in there weak time by providing approppriate medical service and residental service. Moreover, if the people of old age taken care by ministry than they can get better infrastructure and health services. For instatce, old age home have sufficient facilities and instant medical service on the spot which can not be available at home.
On contrary, people at home can not find the enough time to spend on them. If old ager look after under the autority services then they can live better remaining life. Family can not provide the same services which are given by the government old age homes. People sometimes failed to serve their duties towards their parents due to lake of approptiate budget or negligence. If there is a law about home and heathcare facilities for older people than poeple can get the asurity about proper life on older age.
Goverment is one of the crucial part of the society to take care of citizen, so the expense on them is goverment's responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70903010033 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46621617508 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8491727843 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320478535905 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991208622548 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408653382199 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176884795304 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715766417431 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.