A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Though there are various curriculum such as state level,national level, I do support the national curriculum.The student rate who pursue national curriculum is higher than other curriculum.
Having studies with the same curriculum, it ensures that students all over the nation might have covered same syllabus.there wont be any differences in college as well. According to me, national syllabus has high weightage compared to state syllabus. The concepts that are taught in national level schools are very enriched. The students who study over there have very strong skills. Not that they only focus on syllabus they do focus on communication and extra curricular activities as we. there is saying "Today's child is tomorrow's citizen". national level schools focuses equally on sports as well, thus making the students active in every activity.
there are also some concerns, We don't find any national level schools in backward villages and states as well.Government should take responsibility to establish national level schools all over the nation in each city.The school fee should also be abated such that poor family students can also fulfill their dream by attending the national level schools.
every student should procure the liabilities laid by government.Our government should make policies that helps the backward students to attend national schools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'curricula', 'curriculums'?
Suggestion: curricula; curriculums
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...l, I do support the national curriculum.The student rate who pursue national curric...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... be any differences in college as well. According to me, national syllabus has high weightage c...
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Suggestion: National
...odays child is tomorrows citizen'. national level schools focuses equally on sports...
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Suggestion: There
...students active in every activity. there are also some concerns, We dont find an...
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Suggestion: Government
...in backward villages and states as well.Government should take responsibility to establish...
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...chools all over the nation in each city.The school fee should also be abated such t...
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Suggestion: Our
...cure the liabilities laid by government.Our government should make policies that he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 58.6224719101 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63636363636 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91811901797 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.953457846 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223676235376 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890220085574 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522325790776 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144085890862 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145529894834 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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