The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
You shoud write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrated the changes in the amount of acid rain emissions among 4 different categories in UK: Transport and communication, electricity, gas and water supply, domestic and other industries over a period of 17 years, from 1990 to 2007. It can be clearly seen that the total amount of acid rain emissions descended considerably between 1990 and 2007. While electricity, gas and water supply indicated the most dramatic decrease, transport and communication remained the stable in the quantity of acid rain emissions. In 1990, electricity, gas and water supply accounted for the majority in the number of acid rain emissions, with approximate 3,4 million of tonnes. About 2 million tons came from other industries. The figures for other two sectors, transport and communication and domestic, was lower, at about 0,7 and 0,6 millions respectively. In 1997, after 17 years with a significant cut-down, electricity, gas and water supply handed over the first place for other industries with less 0,5 million of tonnes in number (1,25 compared to 1,75 millions). At the same time, transport and communication reached the amount of 0,8 millions, which made it widen the distance with domestic ( about 0,3 millions lower). 2007 witnessed the most remarkable change among 4 sectors. Although having strongly cut-down, other industries took the lead with the figure of 1,25 million of tonnes while electricity, gas and water supply dropped to the third place with only 0,5 million of tonnes. Transport and community was responsible for 0,75 million tons and domestic just contributed a small quantity of 0,25 millions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...city, gas and water supply indicated the most dramatic decrease, transport and co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...made it widen the distance with domestic about 0,3 millions lower. 2007 witnessed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27906976744 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89339462708 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503875968992 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9735898307 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192058876827 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868149503478 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581582662955 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192058876827 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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