People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently.
Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint?
There is no ambiguity by saying that all people have different expectations from their career. some people give priority and prefer to work in the same company throughout the life while other set of people prefer to change their jobs after a period of time. both of the approaches have their own advantages and disadvantages. Today I am going to delve some points on the given statement.
people who prefer to have a single job throughout the life have a pithora of advantages. Among many benifits the main advantage is improvement in benefits and positions for staying at same job. I would like cite an example that masses tend to get more promotions and incentives where they stay at one position. other than this the long term employees get an advantage of job security because they gain the interest of company and are getting at lower risk of being fired. However, as a result of staying at one career they people loose their adaptivity and find a comfort zone at their work place. moreover, they have limited growth in income and above all their increments are very minute.
on the whilst, the people who are in the habit of changing their jobs frequently also have some pros and cons. firstly, they have an experience of all the fields and good knowledge of each and every sphere of life. Secondly, they people become multitasker and have more ability to sort out problems. For instance, they are able to do much more task in short span period of time. Apart from that have very vast known circle and are more socalize than other people. moreover such kind of people prefer to give importance to tourism which help them to strong their bonds with their friends and family members. Inspite of this they have disadvantages also. firstly, they have had a negative impact on the employers owing to their former reputations. For example, they were at the risk of loosing job because their employer do not give priority to such kind of people.
All in all, as far as I am concerned, the people who wish to stayed at one job throughout the life have higher benifits and more chances to achieve a higher designation in their life but other set of people gain much more experience and become versatile as compared to the former.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in short, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44020537026 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8677807968 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309508529269 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102996634721 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871692860919 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211952309569 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713235623716 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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