in this world people would like to travel where an travelling in us in 2009
The transportation is best way to travel
anywhere, in cheap rates. There are
many types of vehicles in
transportation, like, Trains,buses and
taxies, etc. All the transportation had
their on prices buses and taxies are
more expensive then trains. Travelling is now getting more popular
in all countries. In america their are
many peoples loving to travelling. In
2009 american peoples have their own
reasons for travel and they also have
some issues about travelling. Two
types of travels in america first one is
travel by transportation and the second
one is tourists.In america all people can not afford
their own cars. so, poor peoples are
using transportations for their use. that
causes also can be humans are likes
traveling a lot because tourists are travelling for fun and it is very intrasting
than any other activities. By travelling
people can get out of their frustration.
With travelling, peoples can watch a lot
of beutyfull places.
When any family is going for tourists
travel they are like to use more than
transportations because the
transportation can interrupt their own
fun that is not good for thier
enjoyment. americans had so many
issues about thier transportaion, thier
government is the big reason of that
kind of issues in america 2009 that year most public
want to be a well tourist to go for some
intrasting destinations. america is a
hole of beutyfull scenarios, but
"burrberry hills and james" lakes which
are most popular places of america.
Lastly, america is a big country in thier
currency values and their reputation in
the world. america's facilities are
getting fluctuate sometime. but allover
the whole america is leading to another
countries in this world. In my piece of
writing travelling is a fun by great
services. issues are also would be
produce can be stop by our
government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
The transportation is best way to travel anywhere, in cheap rates...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , buses
...ehicles in transportation, like, Trains,buses and taxies, etc. All the transportatio...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...es buses and taxies are more expensive then trains. Travelling is now getting more ...
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Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...e popular in all countries. In america their are many peoples loving to travelling....
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...rtation and the second one is tourists.In america all people can not afford thei...
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Line 16, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... people can not afford their own cars. so, poor peoples are using transportation...
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Line 17, column 38, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...e using transportations for their use. that causes also can be humans are likes t...
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Line 30, column 12, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Americans
... that is not good for thier enjoyment. americans had so many issues about thier transpo...
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Line 35, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: America
...o go for some intrasting destinations. america is a hole of beutyfull scenarios, but ...
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Line 42, column 12, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Americas
...ues and their reputation in the world. americas facilities are getting fluctuate somet...
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Line 43, column 29, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...lities are getting fluctuate sometime. but allover the whole america is leading t...
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Line 47, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Issues
...travelling is a fun by great services. issues are also would be produce can be stop ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, lastly, second, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33552631579 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01742831149 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9772404603 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3684210526 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 46.0 4.38176352705 1050% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246959173509 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827371810229 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600592174173 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517637893415 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663106682374 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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