Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In dev

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Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Submitted by ez2412 on Sat, 08/03/2019 - 11:11

In the 21st century technology is all around us. We take our smartphones everywhere we go, drive electric cars with GPS navagation and eat dinner we cooked using a smart oven that tells us when our food is ready. While all these advancments are aimed at making our day-to-day lives easier, many people believe that they just make them more complicated. I believe that assertion to be incorrect since it lacks understanding of just how much technology has shaped our lives.

Every day, technological advancments allow us to achieve things we were not even able to imagine a few years back. Just as a mere example, the possibilty to conduct a video conversation with a loved one who is in another country seemed almost like science fiction just two decades ago. Today, people use video chats alomst on a daily basis and companies are able to arrange meetings with people from the other side of the world without leaving their office. Video chats have become so essential in our day-to-day life that we forget how miraculaous they really are and how much they simplify our lives. Thus, while we might take it forgranted many times, technology has undoubtfly simplifed and eased our daily routines in various fileds such as communication.

Moreover, technology has not only simplified our lives, it prolonged them. During the 20th century, life expectancy throughout the world, especially amongst developed countries, rose significantlly thanks to technological advancments in the health industry. Therefore, claiming technology complicates our lives seems ridiculous since without it, we might have had much less time to enjoy our lifves in the first place.

Of course, the abovementioned points don't change the fact that technology is, in many cases, complicated and to those who struggle with it this might be very frusturating. For example, it is valid to assert that the elederly community might find many new technological capabilites, such as the smartphone, to be just to difficult to handle. Nevertheless, it is inaqurate to detiermene that personal frustrations, that some individuals may feel, indicate that technology makes life more complicated.

In conclusion, the fact that technological advancments might be complicated to deal with does not mean that these advancements actually complicate our lives. In reality, we owe much more then we might notice to these advancemts, from the ability to communicate easily to the longer lives we enjoy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 9, column 188, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...our lives. In reality, we owe much more then we might notice to these advancemts, fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, in many cases, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24303797468 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97746705212 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579746835443 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1097143469 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.823529412 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 5.21951772744 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155115919534 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570761259927 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505373667161 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956023157573 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389479670763 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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