The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate the transformation of road access to a hospital city between 2007 and 2010. Overall, the road become more develop, involving intersection upgrades and extending parking space as well as bus facilities.
From 2007 to 2010, the most striking change is the appearance of two new roundabouts, which were built on either end of hospital road. The first one was at the three-way junction of hospital road and ring road, the other was at the four-way intersection of hospital road and city road.
Looking at other features, public car park was constructed in the east of city hospital and people could access this car park via the ring road. In two roadsides of hospital road, six bus stops were replaced by bus station on the left and car park on the right which was just for staff-only.
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- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 73
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors who satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 78
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8273381295 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6493971803 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.6428419388 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389654584569 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218116863842 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158777772686 0.0843802449381 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278859229556 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764693348494 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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