Some languages are increasingly spoke in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or negative development?
There is a controversial issue about the diversity of languages. Some linguists say that the wide spread use of one language along with the decline of others is beneficial for the world, while some teachers state that this phenomenon is detrimental. In this essay, I will consider both points of views and agree with the idea that it brings more negative effects.
Let us start with reasons why some linguists advocate that the widespread usage of some language at the expense of others is advantageous. The first reason is that people understand each other better. Many languages cause misunderstanding, for example, in business, but the help of global languages, people would comprehend one another with no linguistic obstacles, while they are holding international meetings. Another reason is that one countries can apply the education system of developed nations easily. Since children would speak, read and write in only several popular language worldwide, authorities can copy the methods of teaching with no need to translate and modify the original version from more prosperous countries. Therefore, it is more pragmatic to speak only a few language than to encounter misapprehension, while speaking in many languages.
However, some teachers argue that the popularity of one language over others in speaking is disadvantageous to the world. They justify their viewpoints with the following arguments. Firstly, it usually leads to the extinction of cultures. Nations tend to stop upholding their traditions and customs, if they replace their mother tongue with foreign languages, since it is an irreplaceable cultural element. Secondly, three world would become a dull place for tourists. The tourist industry is the based on regional differences, but when people start to speak the same language as tourists, they will lose interests in travelling, which would have a detrimental effect on tourist destinations, because this industry would generate less income. As a result, the world would be a dreary place with only few languages as well as cultures.
In conclusion, even though some linguists believe that using a few languages rather than many would have a positive impact on the world, I think that officials should not let it happen for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: few languages
...e, it is more pragmatic to speak only a few language than to encounter misapprehension, whil...
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... speaking in many languages. However, some teachers argue that the popularity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34626038781 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92075807375 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1927038913 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.529411765 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19744693187 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595222957073 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572755503522 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124456537665 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484374278551 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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