At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a fact that some countries’ population consists predominantly of the young people, whereas the older population is not large. This may lead to a bunch of different problems and profits. The essay supports the idea that there is more profit from such a situation than detrimental effects.
To start with, a plethora of young adults inevitably brings fresh ideas into all field of society and technology. Rejuvenating different areas of science and society is a crucial moment in humanity’s development, hence, the largest profit from a large number of the youth is brought by new ideas and new professions. Different revolutions provide a clear example, since it is known that the majority of revolutions and uprisings were triggered by students and/or young workers. These events were cruel and bloody, nonetheless eventually they brought peace and calm, erasing problems of the past.
Nevertheless, a host of problem may arise in a given population distribution, such as a lack of experience by the youth. Indeed, the eldery possesses a vast knowledge about the life itself, thus having skills in different tough situations. So, if there are no skilled and wise persons, how to prevent and solve different problems? This particular side may be alleviated if the old will convey their experience and skill to the youth. Not only will the society gain knowledge, but also the merit of the past will be preserved. Actually, the knowledge exchange presents now even in schools. The professor teaches student different areas of human’s knowledge, and the next generarion is more intellectual thet the former.
Overall, if a country has more young people then the old, it may be associated with several problems such as loss of experience. However, properly imparting the knowledge to the next generation, the problems may be suppressed. Undoubtedly, the main profit is that the society is refreshed by the youth, thus bringing a lot of positive changes. If so, the drawbacks are not significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lopment, hence, the largest profit from a large number of the youth is brought by new ideas and n...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...all, if a country has more young people then the old, it may be associated with seve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, thus, whereas, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21846153846 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01727727101 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9958706404 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124375062337 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035248498668 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541040754409 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850099113303 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621890838137 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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