Some people think that in this modern world people are dependent on each other, while others think the modern world gets people more independent on each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In this modern world, people have sparked a controversy over whether they are more or less dependent on others. I believe that people may depend on others in some aspect and simultaneously, be independent in others. However, in general, humans are still highly social that we still need others in our lives.
The rationale behind the dependency is that life is becoming increasingly expensive and competitive that an individual cannot sail through without others, especially their parents. In the past, people tended to drop out of school and go to work at an early age. As life was much cheaper back then, they could be able to lead their own lives. However, nowadays, the cost of living is extremely high while the job market is very competitive. Hence, people have to live off their parents until they can gain a degree or specialized skills to find a job with a decent salary. Thus, they live dependently on their parents for a much longer time.
Others who think people are more independent might argue that with the advent of technology, people now can do many things that they used to have done by others. It might be illustrated by the fact that nowadays, people tend to live in an immediate family instead of in an extended one. In the past, they lived together to support others in work or household chores. It is not the case for now as family’ members often have different occupations, and many household appliances can assist them in many tasks. For example, vacuums or washing machine has brought people much convenience. Therefore, people now don’t really need the help of others.
Although there is some truth in this, this complete independence is mitigated by the fact that even people live more individually, they still depend on others to some extent. For instance, those who already got married still turn to their parents to support them in taking care of their children.
In conclusion, it is observed that people’s lives are becoming both dependent and independent. But all in all, they still need the support of others to lead a happy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87887323944 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66383569892 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0263849895 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1578947368 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289352654174 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934450746141 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087756285905 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180695286097 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787494631142 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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