Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many country has a law that youngsters can drive a car at the age of 18. One group of people agreed with this view-point, where as others suggest that, car learning age should be at least 25 years. Both the views are discussed furher before providing my opinion.
To begin with, at the age of 18 person is enough mature and near to start the higher studies. At that time car provides a proper facilities for transportation to go to the high school or collage. Also, it becomes convenient for students who pull the car with friends. Moreover, nowadays cab facilities are increasing very fast. Young people like to use it as well as cab service generats employment as a driver. So, many youngsters can get the benefit of job if they know to drive a car.
On the other hand, some people have objection with the age, and suggesting that starting age should be 25 to drive a car. They beleive that at the age of 18 young people do not have proper maturity to drive a car. The chances of accident as well as britch of traffic rules can increase in heavy amount. Poeple of 25 year and above have sufficient knowledge about car and traffic rules, so thay can drive and park a car properly in the area where many people moving.
In conclusion, I have percepsion that if the proper guidance about the car driving and traffi rules provided to the young people can be helpful for them to learn a car. However, mature driver is a first prioty of the nation to maintain traffic and people on the road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun country seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many countries'.
Suggestion: Many countries
Many country has a law that youngsters can drive a c...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... of people agreed with this view-point, where as others suggest that, car learning age s...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ion. To begin with, at the age of 18 person is enough mature and near to start the ...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...ies. At that time car provides a proper facilities for transportation to go to the high sc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, at least, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46350364964 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.404932262 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8538328411 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318872674035 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11465388561 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108599522815 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211856890777 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109596492386 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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