You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to join because you have some problem. Write a letter to your new employer:
Explain your situation
Describe your problem
Tell him/her when you can start
Dear sir, Madam,
I just have learnt about your workshop scheduled to be held in October 2018, through an advertisement in a newspaper. i am curious to attend to seminar, hence required some more information.
let me explain in more detail. While reading the capital daily newspaper,i got to know that your organisation is planning to conduct a workshop on IFRS but the schedule was not mentioned there.
could you please let me know the exact date and time of the seminar so that i make the arrangement accordingly. i would like to know if there will any hands on experience or wil it be just a theoretical season.
Furthermore, as i will be travelling from india, could you please confirm if the living facilities will be provided by you or do we need to do it on our own. if yes, could you please share information about the nearby hotels along with the probable cost per night.
Hoping for an immediate response.
Thanks in advance,
Yours faithfully,
Kushal Rana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...immediate response. Thanks in advance, Yours faithfully, Kushal Rana
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... Thanks in advance, Yours faithfully, Kushal Rana
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78707471502 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5583142796 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212604599594 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669468282292 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480269839781 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070047047152 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061150205875 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.