Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people in this progressed world, thinks that teachers has a special role in the international society such as breed of child. because of their permanent and special role, they have specific area in the society, and by more flourishing of knowledge and society this respect will always growth. While in past, teachers were not like today, their valuable were lower than today.
From my perspective, conversely, I feel that there are some important reasons why teachers in the past were more appreciated and valued by society than now.
In the beginning, teachers had both more salary and a better life. Since the rate of income in every society determines the scale of the occupation's importance, therefore teachers were so valuable in society in past years. Based on the investigations of Kashmar University, teaching profession was similar or even higher than doctors. While, these days, teacher's fee is more little than the doctors or other jobs. So, teachers have lost their value in the society step by step.
In addition, by developing of science, fortunately the world has been changed to a little village. If people need information, they can easily connect on the internet and find their needs. As a matter of the fact, Nowadays, internet is more appreciable than teachers, it has stolen the <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">teachers' </span>position .
Finally, I remembered that my mom told me, when she was a child, during the class all students were silent and never left the class unless their teacher let to them. But, today, children ever speak loud with their teachers, leave the class without asking them, do not pay attention to the class and their teachers. All of these points are the sign of this claim which teachers have not the own past prestige.
In conclusion, personally I strongly believes that teachers in the past was more respectful than today for three significant reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, if, so, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13057324841 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9993935727 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6802058337 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286487521635 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917054251429 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06402676359 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156584780402 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068377531986 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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