You had just missed a friend's party. Write a letter apologising and stating reasons
- why you couldn't attend
- how you will compensate
- Ask how fun it was
Dear Anna,
I am extremely sorry for missing your birthday party on 3rd August. Please allow me to elaborate on the reasons behind my unavailability that day.
If you remember, we discussed that my organisation had made many resources redundant in recent months. At present, there are only 3 resources available in my team who are working against a tight deadline. Being fully occupied in this project, the team is working till midnight every day from last week due to which I forgot your birthday.
You know how excited I was for your birthday. My wife, Deena, reminded me too about this day on second august but it slipped from my mind. To make up for it, we've decided to take you out for dinner over the weekend.
I heard that the party was pretty loud and vibrant. I hope you've captured all the moments in your DSLR which I would like to see in my next visit to your house. Let's meet so that I can pick your brains and know more about this amazing day.
Please confirm your plans and sorry again.
Cheers,
Pardeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...lipped from my mind. To make up for it, weve decided to take you out for dinner ove...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for it, weve decided to take you out for dinner over the weekend. I heard tha...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...rty was pretty loud and vibrant. I hope youve captured all the moments in your DSLR w...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... to see in my next visit to your house. Lets meet so that I can pick your brains and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, as for, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58064516129 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30689646561 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6171240325 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945898199133 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038065828386 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626217373622 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474403774717 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457177296576 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.