Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of all times and other think that adult life will bring you more happiness.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Owing to the fact that pleasure is an important emotional factor in persons' life, some argue that people are happier in their teenage years, while proponents opine that adulthood is the happiest stage in the life cycle. In my opinion, I think that teenage life is the time when a person can live without stress and lead a quality life. this essay will discuss both arguments with reasons.
On the one hand, The major reason for thinking adulthood as a pleasant stage of life is the freedom that is acquired, when a person is mature. In other words, persons are free to choose their own life at this level as they tend to earn money and ready to take responsibilities on their own. Besides, adults can buy anything they want without any restrictions and decide their living style by themselves. Apparently, they will not be guided by parents and would live a joyful life.
On the other hand, teenage years are presumed to be the happiest days in one's life. The main reason behind this notion is that teenagers, especially children, do not undertake any duties and responsibilities, which involve stress and pressure. At this age, they will obtain everything from their families thus, can guide a better life when compared with grown-ups. For example, children do not worry about household chores or about how to earn money for survival. Hence, offsprings are always playful and happier than adults.
In conclusion, it is thought by some people that young age is the time when a person can enjoy more, while others are in the opinion that later stage will provide more enthusiasm and happiness. I think that being a child is the best days as they are out of stress from other life-related problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82993197279 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53233062863 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3958126189 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264853083935 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905730562275 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753489789434 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17881690629 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875090560461 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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