some people believe that people who read books can develop more inmagination and language skill than those who refer to watch TV.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reading books is believed to develop readers' imagination and language skill than watching TV.I totally agree with this statement as the following reasons:
First of all,words and phases in book are more formal and literate than spoken on TV.Furthermore,authors often use various linguistic measures such as personification,metaphor and emphasis.More than that,books contain valuable lessons and writer's attitude forward a problem.Therefore,readers' language ability and critical thinking can be boosted.
Books not only develop readers' language skills but also imagination,Readers have the tendency to build world of imagination through words and phases written in book.They can illustrate the story clearly in their mind.in contrast,people who refer to watch TV absorb the images passively without reflection.
To sum up,reading books is an effective way to develop imagination and language skill and a lot of other skills.As a result,we should read books to make ourselves better
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95774647887 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.96835828607 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718309859155 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.704872708 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.0 106.682146367 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.3333333333 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.0 7.06120827912 510% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357019588208 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223798630173 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505087704098 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209526415754 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632668950197 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.18 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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