In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products such as medicines and clothing Do you agree or disagree

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...ge of astonishing boom in various fields,the using of animals as food or daily produ...
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...to the following reasons. To begin with,it is obvious that animals,especially the ...
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...To begin with,it is obvious that animals,especially the meat parts such as pork or beef, ar...
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...isity and even heart diseases or cancer.More seriously,the digest of high-protein di...
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... heart diseases or cancer.More seriously,the digest of high-protein diets,meat in pa...
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...riously,the digest of high-protein diets,meat in particular,causes dehydration,which ...
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...of high-protein diets,meat in particular,causes dehydration,which increase food craving...
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...ts,meat in particular,causes dehydration,which increase food cravings and muscle cramp...
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...d cravings and muscle cramps.Fortunately,alternative meat products are now available on the ...
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... by an increasing number of vegetarians.For instance,nuts such as almonds or pistac...
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...asing number of vegetarians.For instance,nuts such as almonds or pistachios ,contanin...
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...tance,nuts such as almonds or pistachios ,contaning healthy types of fat,greatly b...
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...stachios ,contaning healthy types of fat,greatly benefit human’s health.Furthermore,tofu...
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...s of fat,greatly benefit human’s health.Furthermore,tofu and mushroom are rich in protein,...
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...urthermore,tofu and mushroom are rich in protein,a kind of nutrient presumably on...
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...e,tofu and mushroom are rich in protein,a kind of nutrient presumably only found ...
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...f nutrient presumably only found in meat,can be a substitute. In addition,nowadays,...
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...n meat,can be a substitute. In addition,nowadays,animals-based medicines receive little ...
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...ed medicines receive little endorsement.To be more precise,the use of rhinoceros’ ...
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...ve little endorsement.To be more precise,the use of rhinoceros’ horn or tigers’bones...
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...st plants-based medicine such as ginseng,which can prolong our life expectancy and aid...
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...nd crocodiles are killed in large number,with their fur and skin taken to fulfill the...
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...ieu of using body parts of those animals,we can use similar products made from plan...
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...o save them from the edge of extinction.As a result,animals do not have to suffer ...
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...e To take everything into consideration,i hold a firm belief that using animals f...
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... sectors of life is no longer necessary.On an other hand,we should protect animals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in particular, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73786407767 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.37681656999 2.80592935109 156% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.153162745 49.4020404114 377% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 443.25 106.682146367 415% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.25 20.7667163134 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24610662276 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155116004509 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853401653729 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162770456671 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731685348814 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.2 13.0946893788 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.6 50.2224549098 -47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.2 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.26 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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