In countries university students must pay considerable amount of enrollment while in other countries post-secondary study is free. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both view and give opinion.
Nowadays, education play consequential part in every once life. For the personal growth, education is the necessary factor Owing to which in some countries university students must pay considerable amount of money for enrollment but in rest of the nations post-secondary study is free. It has both advantages as well as disadvantages, as far as my knowledge is concern college students must pay considerable amount of price.
At the outset, sans proper knowledge despite of education is worthless. There are some colleges who do not have proper facilities provided to students due to which unable to study well. With the help of enrollment fee university will get enough money to provide necessary things which are crucial for study. For instance, Nirma university, is having high enrollment fee in order to give sufficient condition for students which stands as a paragon. Also, to learn easier and quicker with the help of advance technology which is exorbitant in price and can only be provider if they have funds. However,a person who do not deserve admission in well developed university will also get admission because he or she is able to give enrollment fee. Therefore, university will give the admission to him rather than giving admission to the person who deserve.
On the other hand, if countries college fee is free than equality will be well mantain and every person who deserve will eligible for that. To cite an example, in India myriad of colleges do not take enrollment fee because of which needy people and wealthy people get admission. By the reason of which employment rate and awarness will proliferate. Yet, on an amount of less fundings enough facilities will not be provided. Henceforth, will not be able to provide proper education.
In conclusion, both have consequences either positive or negative but in countries who pay enrollment fee have more benefits and less affects.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...necessary factor Owing to which in some countries university students must pay considerab...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Suggestion: , a
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun fundings is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... will proliferate. Yet, on an amount of less fundings enough facilities will not be ...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun affects is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...y enrollment fee have more benefits and less affects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10897435897 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83379738629 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6960729566 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239776676718 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759694338402 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929088785112 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169788302186 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118580917922 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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