Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Getting the right advice from the right source is always a puzzle question. Many individuals believe that we should depend on other people for any information or guidance. However, remaining individuals do not agree and consider that online websites or notes provide more variety of guidance. Before reaching to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both ideas.
To begin with, information from experienced people is mostly helpful for the receiver because experienced people have lived that life and are practically aware of positives and negatives about the information material. Therefore, mostly they prefer to guide in the right direction. For instance, our parents are the best example of other people who know much more than us, therefore relying on them for advice or information has always proven better for the younger generation.
However, technology has completely changed the scenario by making people independent of each other. Nowadays, plenty of individuals prefer to cross-check their knowledge through different websites before making any decisions, especially new generations, which is completely versed with this new technology and believed on it because of the feel that information is supported with proves. For instance, a person with a mobile internet can come to know about everything around the world through the google search engine and keeps him with up to date with all relevant data. Although, there are some lope holes such as the authenticity of data is not proven, thus depending on sources from the internet can be considered with the risk associated.
In conclusion, while, internet information is widely helpful to know about plenty of information from various sources, I believe that depending on other people is more beneficial as it does not carry any drawbacks and complete information can be considered as faithful.
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- Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do a different kind of jobs. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree? 61
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern school. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ormation can be considered as faithful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40753424658 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83643319254 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0449865081 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.583333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271267122846 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942414432835 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075516316441 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180189208811 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623890634427 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.