Government argue that the population of children should control through taxes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that today's children are a policymaker of tomorrow but the population is increasing around the globe and authorities claim that it can control the number of newborns through taxes. This essay will highlight this approach certainty with a rational approach that needs to have opted.
It is a decent way to impose different taxes to control overpopulation. Firstly, due to overpopulation, there may be a shortage of food in the future all around the world owing to if people consume more food, then this may lead to the negative impact on the development of every nation. Some government says that they impose a higher tax on person who brings two or more children in a family, thus it can be real for every country curing to which, today the majority of people are employed due to the increase in the number of job seekers. For instance, law enforcement agencies created a one-child policy in 2015. In fact that people should aware of the escalate the amount of population. Therefore, every person in China only gave birth to one child in a family.
Apart from this, overpopulation is a major problem in some countries, such as China, India, and even in Pakistan. Even if the population of children would be increased in the future, then the usage of the automobile also incline, hence it is not only harmful to the environment, like pollution and land degradation, but it also creates more perilous maladies for individuals life. It seems that the main solution for this problem is tax due to a poverty-stricken people could not afford the higher tax, thus this may help people to become aware of the level of population in their nation. In the long run, if the population decrease in the future with the help of taxes, it would be very beneficial for the development of every country, people can easily live hale and hearty lifestyle.
It is concluded that although authorities take high tax from poor and rich people who give birth to more than two children in a family, it would be a positive impact on the enhancemnt of every country around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76731301939 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74919827857 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506925207756 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6374831641 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11406203991 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433953350286 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558930679589 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755599345606 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433356168118 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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