The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care systems in an effort to deal with issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?
The recent increase in the people’s obesity has created concerns in the health care system. There are several ongoing debates to address this issue by heightening of the physical education studies in the schools. In opinion, launching this solution may boost the chances of the children participating in sports but it is not enough solution to the concern.
The deal with this type of health issue in children, problem has to be accessed in the more integrative way. Firstly, the issue of fast food consumption has to be address. The technology improvement and time restriction have leaded the people to fast food eateries. The high content of carbohydrates, fat and dye in foods are major cause of the overweight. The importance of the having healthy food has to be created in the children.
Secondly, the issue to be address is the life style of the people. Nowadays, the children stay attached to their mobile phones, iPods and video games without any physical work through the day. The awareness has to be created about the ill effects of the life style and encourage people to take healthy routines such as exercising and yoga. Another issue is the increase of weight reduction programs in the society. The people are leaning towards these programs to reduce their weight as it will be easiest way. However, these programs have the disastrous effects on the health of the individuals. So, the youth has to be educated towards the effects and aftermath of these programs.
Thus, in conclusion the education about key aspects of food, health and physical activities in the daily life will be better way in approaching the problem of the overweight in the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97153024911 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70960396048 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498220640569 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0376206014 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216600989009 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702950520204 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753662914796 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134535232083 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324116896487 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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