Completing university education is thought by some to be best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
There is a discussion among the people, that some think University education is more important for the job whereas others say experience and skills are rather necessary for work. In my opinion, the University education is a major requirement for the any profession.
University education enables people in acquiring both theoretical and practical experiences that are required for working in this unpredictable world. Theoretical aspects aid the students in the understanding the concepts in the subjects and practical aspects learnt during the college help them in applying it in the real world. Education not only creates experts who always move towards the further education in the field but also entrepreneurs who work in the practical world. Further, social life in the college environment also assists students in creating healthy human relationships and partnerships.
On the other hand, people’s experience and soft skills helps them acquire jobs early but opportunities seize to exist only in their respective fields. Even though people have skills required for work experience, they struggle to operate in the working conditions as they have less social skills to deal with the colleagues. These People also experience less human relationships and social life as they have started their work life very early in life and got deprived from the university exposure.
According to me, the University education fulfills the academic, practical and social requirements for working in this practical, technological and uncertain world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... deprived from the university exposure. According to me, the University education fulfills the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5914893617 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0148388109 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540425531915 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9942586488 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199012696869 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888511721632 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823523188475 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127672175399 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815817995389 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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