You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.
Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter
1- Tell your boss of your decision and explain why are you leaving?
2- Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving
3- Ask for a letter of reference.
Dear Ophelia ma’am,
I am writing this letter to inform that I have decided to resign from the organization. I got another opportunity to work in oil industry on a managerial role in Canada. The financial support from my current post of medical representative is not sufficient to fulfil my needs, so I have taken this decision.
Although I have learn many things from the current post, such as team management and supervision roles. I am sure these things will help me in long run to my career. More importantly, your sales training's were quite effective and I have learnt many lessons from those practical workshops. It was harsh decision to take, it took me many months to decide, and especially my family as they all were happy living here.
I want you to do me a favor by writing reference letter for my upcoming aspirations. I hope you will do the needful and send it to my postal address written at the back of letter.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Bhat
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| 2019-08-21 | bhatvishal@ | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ophelia ma'am, I am writing this letter to inform that ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...taken this decision. Although I have learn many things from the current post, such...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79885057471 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83755019488 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4771489719 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2374018691 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856020269925 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633086751493 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919292813847 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493312426133 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.