Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although exchanging in last century become to a common issue and some people proof that, the other insist that there is some in confidence information which is better to be secret. This essay will examine both views and will put forth some reason to illustrate my affirmative opinion with former aspect.
Recently, the more progressed country was, the more advanced information it produces. However, some information should be covered, on the grounds following reasons:
first and foremost reason is any country never let other countries know about their military’s data, only due to that it is completely in confidence, but old or insignificant information. Because it is related to their attack or defense power directly. Secondly, every company has its secrecy for being the best or permanent in global markets. To exemplify, most of cars factories never allow to other find out their new consequences, even if they let other counties assemble their products. Thirdly, break through usually keep countries powerful in any aspects. For example, having more active factories leads to having dynamic economy. Thus, leaking new information for those companies not only does make them weaker but also it damages that country’s economy.
Moreover, some information is vital for human beings, for instance, healthy information which leads to survive people should not be in confidence, that is inhuman. one more thing could be essential is environment changing dada. The reason why is that environments in all over the world are related to each other as a chain. For example, if progressed countries do not warn about global warming, some situation will arise which all countries such as advanced one will be involved that. Next issue that could be shared is basic knowledge, like mathematics and physics and so on. those are necessary for making information in mostly field.
In conclusion, in my opinion, any knowledge which is not in confidence or do not harmful to producer countries, should be shared. but the first world countries not only do not let other know or learn new information, but also they absorb other countries’ scientific to make more progresses and make that countries behind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32768361582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8408867328 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3924738871 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182104180442 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566971153097 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484606746001 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1181827967 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570188374513 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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