the best methodology that can be adopted to understand the tradition and values of modern society is to examine the practices adopted by the youngsters
I agree that the best methodology that can be adopted to understand the tradition and values of modern society is to examine the practices adopted by the youngsters. Youngsters believe live in relationship more than marriage,in live-in relationship a couple lives together for amount of time without marrying each other for several months.Young buddies wear only jeans and pant.Now studies are more online then offline.In India its dishes are dal,rice,chapati but now the youngster are getting attracted to Chinese ,Italian ,snacks like burger,sandwich. In India children play video games,x-box rather than playing our own games like kabaddi,hockey.In India children are more equipped with modern instruments like laptop rather than old computers. Now not only men are doing jobs but women are also doing them and taking care of house also,now women are given more and more opportunities like going in army,civil services. I conclude by saying that the best method that can be adopted to understand the traditions and values of modern society is to examine the practies adopted by the youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 2235.4752809 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 442.535393258 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37790697674 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.55969084622 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0599020034 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 215.323595506 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.0 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364472719611 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.302491169728 0.0831039109588 364% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.35598629554 0.0758088955206 470% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364472719611 0.150359130593 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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