good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
As challenges are mend to conquer some day,these are the hurdles which make us more skilled.I ,agree that Good teachers set challenging tasks for their students.
Firstly,I remember that our Java teacher came with policy that nobody will copy or paste the code from the internet and from the notebook of any friend to complete the assignment given by him.As a result ,in the first assignment nobody got good result but the teacher still appreciated for the current score of us.After that children opened their minds and searched for the solutions in many Java books and put our reasoning and thinking skills combined to generate fruitful results.Furthermore,a good teacher is that who makes his student aware of all kinds of challenging tasks.
Secondly,On top of that parents are also a good teacher for us.Once upon time,I remember that my friend's father assigned all tasks to him .Uncle said that he have to clean the house,cook food for his family,pay the electric bill,wash clothes of all.All these tasks were to be done by him per day.As he firstly was struggling with the new rule of his father.But gradually,realized that he was becoming independent,doesn't need anybody concern to him for making his own decisions even not his parents.As he is currently pursuing his master's from san jose state university and now he is appreciating his father to train him like that.Consequently he doesn't feel much work load on him as he was already trained and instructed well by his father.
Thirdly,our cricket coach played a woman in a men's cricket team.Firstly,It was very difficult to cope up with men ,as they were more physically strong.But because of woman's arduous hardwork on each day and better batting skills.Eventually,She proved that woman can play more better than men.
At the end ,I will prefer that teacher should give challlenges to student which makes them more resilient and strong in their life to face tough situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10591900312 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05242223005 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629283489097 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.1344086022 318% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.944569762 48.9658058833 482% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.8 100.406767564 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.2 20.6045352989 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.2 5.45110844103 499% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285431602507 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186924926486 0.076458572812 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189175183347 0.0737576698707 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186924926486 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189175183347 0.0645574589148 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.7 11.7677419355 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.0537634409 275% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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